
Winter night
The blizzards all across the earth
Have swept uncurbed
The candle burned upon the desk
The candle burned
As in the summer, moths are drawn
Towards the flame
The pale snowflakes soared
Towards the pane
Upon the glass, bright snowy rings
And streaks were churned
The candle burned upon the desk
The candle burned
On the illumined ceiling
Shadows swayed
A cross of arms, a cross of legs
A cross of fate
Two boots fell down on the floor
With crashing sound
And from the crown tears of wax
Dripped on the gown
And nothing in the snowy haze
Could be discerned
The candle burned upon the desk
The candle burned
A gentle draft blew on the flame,
And in temptation,
It raised two wings into a cross
As if an angel
It swept and swept all through the month
This frequently occurred
The candle burned upon the desk
The candle burned
Translated by Andrey Kneller
17 Comments:
My favourite of yours to date! Excellent lines, colour and atmosphere Lily! Love the glassed windows. Want those slippers with matching chair :)
Every girl MUST have a pair of slippers to match her chair and a feather boa...
On unrelated note -- if Andrea will come to visit -- I can't get to her blog, it just would not load... Lily.
Completely agree :) On the other note - Andrea uses Flickr which has been having loading problems which are most probably related.
a poetic beatuiful piece!!
Yep - Master and Margarita is one of the great ones - I felt so sad when I finished it the first time - i wanted it to go on for years.
Beautiful pastel(?) painting! Neat vertical composition too!
-steph
Excellent technique.Beautiful.
This is a truly lovely illustration for the poem and the topic - you capture the mood quite well with your colors and composition. Nicely done!
Wonderful little pastel.
Beautiful. Would love to know how big it is in actuality. Nice work. Thanks for showing.
Actually it is not pastel, it is acrylic on paper. The size is 3 ½” by about 9”, so it is not very large…rather small. My sweetie, the Druid, thinks it came together so quickly that I had no time to over think it, and muck it up, he-he. Lily.
Wow - I can see that contrast between the blustery cold outside and the warmth inside. I also thought it was pastel...there's something powdery about the texture. The play of light throughout is amazing. I need to say WOW again:>
Both glamourous AND a chair! :)
I really like the windows, and the light treatment. There is a lot of texture going on and sultry colors.
i love this!!!
beautiful picture and poem, but watch that candle so close to the drapes!
Excellent piece!
You have a Druid ... I have a Bearman and he is the one who ALWAYS mucks up };-}
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